Final essay


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Final Essay

 In this class I have learned many events which are taking place in the world. I recognized others peoples opinion and also thought that their opinion could be totally different with me. Some of articles that my classmates chose are very interesting but some of them are not. Im interested in argument that we have to overcome to make better world, national problem, Asias event which is related to Korea and education. So I looked around classmates blog and chose below three articles. 1. Equal marriage arrives to the CC which is in 전혁준(Jeonhyukjoon)s blog. 2. Seoul rejects Japans call to cancel military exercise near Dokdo in 이승환(Lee seung hwan)s blog. 3. “Cultivating self-confidence in students” in 오승진(Oh Seung Jin)’s blog

 

 In 전혁준(Jeonhyukjoon)s blog, I was interested in an article Equal marriage arrives to the CC about homosexual and His opinion opposite exactly to my opinion. so I want to talk about this article. According to this article, in Ecuador probably gay marriage is going to be allowed. Pamela Troya and Gabriela Correa delivered protective action to the Constitutional Court(CC) and are waiting the decision. Class mate 전혁준(Jeonhyukjoon) said that he doesn’t like it. Because it is against reproductive rule, affect bad image to adoptee and it is incorrect to have sexual relationship. But I disagree with his opinion. I think we should support homosexual. I believe all the people are equal and have a right to love somebody. I dont understand what he said against reproductive rule and incorrect. I m so much wondering that who can judge that is incorrect or not and what is reproductive rule. As long as people dont give trouble to other, doing what they want to do is their right. I really think we need to understand homosexual people and help them based on person versus person not based on emotion.

 

 Second article is in 이승환(Lee seung hwan)s blog. Article “Seoul rejects Japan's call to cancel military exercise near Dokdo” looks like interesting because Dokdo is very sensitive problem to all Korean. According to the article, Japan asked South Korea to stop military action near Dokdo but Korea government rejected it and emphasized Dokdo is Korea’s territory. Class mate 이승환(Lee seung hwan) think that Japan is actually good country because they have many things that we have to learn. But because now they are making many problem with other countries, not only Korea but also china, he is disappointed to Japan. He didn’t mention specifically about Dokdo and how we have to behave. I think we have got to insist that Dokdo is our island again and again. Partially I agree with him. I also know Japan has very high civic consciousness and we should learn that. But I think Dokdo is another problem. We must protect our territory and react strongly to that kind of request. It is true that Dokdo is our island. We have to show our consciousness to Japan. I absolutely believe that Dokdo is Korean territory and only Korean can protect Korean territory Dokdo.

 

 I found my last article in 오승진(Oh Seung Jin)’s blog. This article “Cultivating self-confidence in students” say about confidence which is what I need. Therefore I decided to read this article. Article says confidence make people more engage in work. According to article, first how well we do, second observing people we know perform same task, third persuasion or feedback affect mostly to self-confidence. 오승진(Oh Seung Jin) agrees with this article and thinks this article is good to read for person who doesn’t have self-confidence. In his opinion, Self-confidence is crucial for learning and can make outcomes well. What I think is same with what he thinks and what article says. I think self-confidence is the most important thing to achieve something. In my case, I’m normally good at what I do well. I believe confidence make people more motivated. Person should be competitive compared with other to succeed and I think it comes from self-confidence. Since people tend to do what they are good at, they are going to develop what they do well. It is going to be competitive and finally lead people to success. Self-confidence leads everything! So I think making self-confidence is very important.

 

 So far, I talked about three articles. All three article was related to what I’m interested in (arguing, Asia’s event, education) and they make me think more even something was what I already know. I could organize my thoughts about many events happening in the world and felt many things like ”Although I’m living well, there is a crisis like Dokdo where I can’t see”, “I could remind self-confidence that I already know but didn’t treat as an important thing”. It was really good experience to read other country’s article, talk about it and write my opinion against somebody’s opinion. I have learned many things since this class started and appreciate professor Jimmy and all my class mates.

 

 

 

 

<Source>

1a. 전혁준(Jeon hyuk joon)s blog Welcome to the Hyuk joon world Blogproject1 first article. Equal marriage arrives to the CC”” 8 July 2014


1b. "Equal marriage arrives to the CC" ECUADOR TIMES, ECUADOR TIMES LA, 24 June 2014. Web 8 July 2014


2a. 이승환(Lee seung hwan)s blog “Seung Hwan’s Blog” Blogproject1 - fourth article “Seoul rejects Japan's call to cancel military exercise near Dokdo”8 July 2014


2b. "Seoul rejects Japan's call to cancel military exercise near Dokdo", YONHAP NEWS, 19 June 2014. Web 8 July 2014


3a. 오승진(Oh Seung Jin)’s blog “Jin’s blog” Blogproject2   second article “Cultivating self-confidence in students” 8 July 2014


3b. K Ranga Krishnan, "Cultivating self-confidence in students", TodayOnline, 01 Jul 2014. Web 8 July 2014

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